开题:描述的方式来引出要议论的主题。
以叙代议 常见:
As we can see ,… has become a very important problem in the rapidly developing world.
Adimttedly, … has attracted more and more attention from people.
As we know…. Bring us many b123fits and conviences.
Judging from that fact, it is very obvious that…has become part of our everyday life to some extent.
The emergence of … is really worth our respect in history while it still remains meaningful to us now.
个人描述:以个人的亲身经历来引起要议论的问题。
Once, I had the experience of…
I can never forget the experience of…
Personally, at first sight of this topic, I could not help thinking about the…
引用名言式:用一个相关的谚语、术语、名言或名人实例来引题。
Just as the saying goes, …
The saying that… comes to me at the first sight of this topic.
在引题时要注意不要照抄原题, 而且篇幅不宜过长,在引题之后,迅速进入自己所支持的观点,或表态,并引起下文。
论述L详细阐述分支观点的部分,在开题首段的第二句一般是文章的主旨句所在,而在论述部分的理由段中,各个分论点应该放在首句的位置,开门见山。
论述部分一般写两到三段比较理想,机构应该是:转乘句或顺乘句引导的主旨句+ 展开句+ 支持句+ 例证句。
主旨句不应太长,太复杂,同时在构思主旨句的时候。尽量避免使用一些太空洞的词汇。
结尾:结尾的目的在于重申观点,与首段呼应,注意改写,不要照搬题目和 照抄开题中的主题句。
句子:
1、 Not only…but also 不但……而且……
2、 No matter when/how/who/where/what 不管何时/怎样/是谁/在哪/什么
3、 It is obvious/apparent/clear that… 很显然……
4、 It is well known that… 众所周知的是……
5、 So…that; such… that; so that 如此…….以至于
6、 Too…to 太……以至于不能
7、 The more…, the more… 越……越……
8、 Only when 只有当…..才能
9、 It be …that… 正是……
10、…had done, … would have done 如果……就会……
检查:
1、指代方面:在使用it,he,this,that,which,one时,前面要有明确的先行词。
2、修饰方面:修饰语应紧靠被修饰成分,并和他有逻辑关系。
3、一致方面:在一个句子里或紧邻的两三个句子里,要保持时态、人称、数的一致。
4、平行方面:在一个句子里,或紧邻的几个句子里,在表达相同、相邻或相对的几个意思时,所使用的语法结构要保持一致性。
5、语法方面:happen,take place,occur,arise,belong to等动词词组没有被动形势。不可数名词不能用复数,而可数名词要么前面有冠词要么构成复数形式。有些不定代词只能用在可数名词前:a great/good/large/small number of,each,either,both,few,many,neither,another;有些只能用在不可数名词前:a great amount of,a great/good deal of, a bit of,less,much; 有些两者都可以用:all,a lot of,lots of,enough,half,more,most,plenty of,some,such。 实际上,除了叙述文叙述过去的事要用过去时,议论文艺版都用现在时。
6、断句方面:以because,since,if 等引导的从句不能独立成句的。没有动词的句子一般不但度成句。
7、连词方面
8、搭配方面:speed 只和high,low,good,top,normal,fantasic,moderate,suprising等搭配,price只和high,low,inflated,moderate,minimum,original,popular,prevailing,published,reduced,reasonable等搭配。Knowledge只和obtain,acquire,develop,enlarge,gain,pursue,deepen,accumulate,pick up等搭配。Opportunity只和rare,scantly,little,poor,great,ample,abundant,favourable,good,golden,convient等搭配。
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