假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

题一：

Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!

题二：

My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

答案：

题一：

第一句:before→ago　此处讲述的是过去发生的事情,和一般过去时连用的应是ago,before常和完成时连用。

第一句:by→of　with the help of...在……的帮助下,为固定短语。

第二句:year→years　句中year是可数名词,前面的these应修饰复数形式的名词。

第二句:had→have　时间状语since then 通常和现在完成时连用,而不是过去完成时。

第三句:在result前加a　as a result 结果,为固定短语。

第三句:somewhere→everywhere　根据句意可知是“到处都有”,所以用everywhere。

第四句:taste→tasty　本句中small,juicy和tasty是并列的表语,所以要用形容词。

第五句:much→many　根据前面的be动词are和后面的them可知应是代替可数名词复数的many。

第六句:删掉but/but→yet　引导让步状语从句的although不能和连词but连用,但是可以和副词yet连用。所以可以删掉but,也可以把but改为yet。

第七句:wonderfully→wonderful　修饰名词时应用形容词。

题二：

第二句:They→There　表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课”应使用there be句型。

第三句:didn’t→don’t　全文时态是以一般现在时为主,故应将didn’t改为don’t。

第三句:many→much　homework是不可数名词,故应用much修饰。

第四句:with→for　表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以(用于……)时,应使用介词for。

第五句:第一个hour→hours　“一个半小时”要说one and a half hours。

第六句:look→looks　主语My dream school(我梦想中的学校)是单数,其谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数形式。

第七句:删掉第一个the　all kinds of(各种各样的)后直接加可数名词复数或不可数名词,不用再加冠词。

第八句:sat→sit　We can lie...,or (can) sit...

第八句:listening后加to　listen是不及物动词,接宾语时要加介词to。

第九句:helpfully→helpful　and连接两个形容词作表语,故应将副词helpfully改为形容词helpful。