高考英语改错专项训练三(附答案解析)

三、Correction 3

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

答案

1.第二句：删掉had.此处指过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。

2.第二句：noise→noisy.此处作表语，应该是形容词。

3.第三句：comes→came.此处是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。

4.第四句：but→and.此处是顺承关系。

5.第五句：在searching后加for.搜寻某个东西应该用search for.

6.第五句：his→its/the.此处指票的主人。

7.第六句：a→the.此处特指丢了的票。

8.第七句：previous→previously.此处应该用副词形式。

9.第八句：strangers→stranger.此处指的是票的主人，只有一个人，所以用单数。

10.第九句：on→in.此处是固定词组in need.